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Post by silver on Mar 24, 2007 22:54:32 GMT -5
Name: Rhoundskel Alliance: Light. Gender: Stallion Age: 7 Breed: Paint Color: Black and white tovero paint Height: 16 hands Markings: splotches of black all over his white coat.
Personality: Hound has a responsible heart. He is generally level headed but loves power and has wanted the whole valley a long time. He finds those who don’t hate the darks a disappointment, these include his own daughter, Ikazuchi, the young Ladylet.
History: When Rhoundskel first came into the world he was a large brute. He grew and learned power and rank meant everything. His mother, Lady Sabine of Skyherd in the north, tried to teach him otherwise and got herself killed by her own mate, Hound's father, Ivenskel. Hound knew there was a valley and wanted it. His old home in Skyherd had been distroyed, even though most of the heard got away. He was four when he came to the valley and a year later found a mate, Lady Kazu Amry. He also became Lord of the Lights. He found his hate for the darks when Kazu was allegedly killed by a dark when Ladylet Ikazuchi was a year old. Nobody knows what really happened, even though Lady Kazu's friend, Tella, thinks differently.
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Post by Meg on Mar 25, 2007 7:42:24 GMT -5
A few things: First, I'd like a bit more for history. You say he came to the valley when he was four. How did he get here? Did he find it by chance, or was he looking for it? Why was he on his own in the first place? A little more about his mate wouldn't hurt, either. And maybe, even if he doesn't know it, you having a reason how his mate was killed could work. Could go all plot-ish with that, if you'd like. And how long ago the mate was killed. Otherwise, I think he would be a good leader for the Lights. Just remember, when the Lights first came, they weren't looking to rule the whole valley, just for a place to live.
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Post by silver on Mar 25, 2007 10:07:55 GMT -5
Heh... Ya. He was. XP
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Post by Meg on Mar 25, 2007 14:50:53 GMT -5
Okay, this is better. Accepted!
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